Initial / / Ident Two

For this ident I want to follow an irratic tone, using flashing imagery and inconsistent timing to create the appropriate visuals


I will be using this storyboard as a starting point:

This is what i've come up with so far:

This is the general look i'm going for, though I think the pace needs to be a lot quicker to get across the irratic tone I want to achieve.
As per, this is rubbish.  There are aspects of this experimentation that I think work well with, but it just doesn't flow as it should.



More work on flow:




Further development:




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